The winners are:
First Place - Paris Sea - Early morning, PMO
Second Place - Gabe Foreman - Fall Guys
Third Place - Jim Nason - Market
Honourable Mention - Jaun Harrow - In April
Honourable Mention - Karen P. Ouellette - Cornetto
Honourable Mention - Dethe Elza - Untitled
Congratulations!
The 10 words from the 2010 contest
First Place
Paris Sea
Early morning, PMO
Hansard, bound in the dead of night, arrives.
Lay the debate open on the table.
Leaf through, take in the gore of question period,
petitions splayed, begging attention like porn or Maclean’s magazine.
Practise self-denial.
Underscore each foible of the opposition including
your own backbenchers run amok
cabinet ministers slipping their collars
forthcoming civil servants
reporters immune to spin.
Mark the impending 4th anniversary of
Her Excellency the Right Honourable Michaëlle Jean
with a solemn X and an asterisk
* deadline to appoint my own man.
Eat grit with some greens for breakfast.
Cut up a bloc of cheddar, mild as the NDP.
Slake your thirst for deficit spending with some domestic
sparkling wine and celebratory cuts
to the CBC.
Tune into CPAC.
Watch the culture slowly grow
not spindly and wan, but
resistant as dandelions, prairie fires, like
the exaggerations on lobbyists’ CV’s
too numerous to counter.
It was easier to etiolate democracy.
That took but a note to the Governor General,
a prorogation, or two.
Admit she came in handy that way.
Second Place
Gabe Foreman
Fall Guys
Despite their common name, scapegoats
are seen in the spring and summer.
Take note: the fact that you got dumped
on your anniversary means nothing to the Mounties
kicking down your office door. Life is never fair.
When your office door implodes, no one's there.
You’re a white-collar criminal on the lam, a torn leaf,
plus your pants are short, making you look solemn,
autumnal, too old to unwind at the nautical motel.
On your bedside table, the grit from a cigarillo
mars the glossy cover of Fortune magazine.
On the mattress, turned down sheets reveal a sandbar
of fuchsia sailboats, moon-blue anchors.
Some senior partners had remarked from the start
how you seemed bound to bring trouble to their business.
Dead air piled up on you for a November of reasons.
Crops to a criminal mastermind, fall guys etiolate,
wither and slake the Creator’s thirst for the worst
in hide-outs at the nautical motel.
Their lips tongues and teeth are celestial refugees
embedded in the rubble of a sensual war
Third Place
Jim Nason
Market
Air redolent with herb.
Marrow bone, leg of lamb, tenderloin
bound with red string. Travel makes you wise—
tomorrow I fly, but today, labyrinth of stalls,
June through cracks in wood-beam ceiling,
gold-glass shadows trampled under hurried feet.
Talking, tasting, people pushing past; sawdust, road
grit carried in from street. Harlan, the Egg Man, died
November eleven, a solemn day made sober by
handwritten note: Seven months Anniversary
of passing. Sixty-two years his fold-out table,
his pyramid of yolks, this frown-face photo torn
from grease-stained magazine. Deli-pink salmon, silver
sardines. Vinyl tablecloth: red rose, green leaf—long trays
of cupcakes and cookies. Barrel of coffee. Case of loose
black tea. Mango, grape, orange juice in cooler to slake
heat-wave thirst, but does not console against this shoving.
I know the names of merchants, their far-fetched stories.
Hermes, the fish guy, from the Danforth, and before that,
Mytilene. “No trout today?” he asks. “No tilapia or tuna?”
Tight-lid barrels etiolate dry oats. Young man at cash,
world-weary, indifferent to my small purchase of green apples.
Tomorrow no parcels or World Famous Pea Meal, no grey bin
heaped with entrails from Seafront Fish. Tomorrow is spice
market, feta and olives, religion mixed with politics. Adieu brick
and concrete, oranges in crates, crisp red grapes, overflowing
barrels. Farewell hog-town brick; soup-bone and flies; pig
hocks on silver hook. Tomorrow, unbound, unwound,
ample wax wings to
Honourable Mention
Jaun Harrow
In April
This season, this month
you worry about papers, exams.
You analyze Wordsworth and Byron
and tell me this morning with a voice so solemn
that they both died in April.
Not a note from an Aeolian harp
but the of gurgle of the coffee pot
heralds this proclamation.
Today you document April as the anniversary of dead poets
while I revel in my gardening magazine,
seed catalogues spread across the kitchen table.
My poetry is Kroetsch not Keats—
the measure of the quarter section
bound by barbed wire
rewritten by the plow.
Not the prim order of the English garden
my labyrinth is of lilacs
my thorns of caragana.
No sham ruins but the rusted husk of an old John Deere.
No nightingales but magpies
who slake their hunger on roadside gopher guts.
Come to the garden with me and feel
the grit beneath your nails
damp dirt upon your skin.
Dig in with your scholar’s hands
where feeble sprouts etiolate
under autumn’s ode of decomposing leaves,
where poetry gnaws at the lingering edge of graveled snow—
new bud not yet in leaf
straining to the unseen sun.
Honourable Mention
Karen P. Ouellette
Cornetto
In the monthly magazine,
you are bound for glory,
standing tall, antiquated,
your lean body
legendary,
-a solemn note
of wood and wind…
anniversary time,
from the grit of a summer stage,
breath centered
on evening’s ensemble,
you etiolate
then bow gentle
-a lost lover,
a long leaf free-floating;
from a table of notes
that slow rise before us,
you slake
your solemn sadness
into Renaissance movements
-a passion that sky-drifts
winged creatures
-soft-veiled lovers,
where ancient sounds
pulse precious;
leap wistfully
above the grey gauze cloud …
a poignant celebration,
Cornetto,
bending bone and air
on perfumed breeze.
The ten 2010 2-Day Poem Contest words were:
| 1. grit | 2. bound | 3. anniversary | 4. table | 5. note |
| 6. leaf | 7. etiolate | 8. magazine | 9. slake | 10. solemn |
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